You have potential
it's not great, but not at all bad... add a storyline, some interesting music and you'll be well on your way!
Do u really think so?? I'm sorry, but u really need to do better... I (and lots of ppl on NG) hardly find random things with no plot funny...
coming from a brazilian sound engineer?
That's the kind stuff NG needs!! Intelligent humor, well animated!!
And I especially loved the use of metalanguage!
It seems like a bad rip-off of Papers, Please. It is almost fully functional (the lack of a mute button is really annoying), so it gets a star.
Seems great! Good story, interesting idea! But sadly, broken game is broken!
It's well done and all, but it feels a little too slow and easy. You have a long time to see the ball coming at you, and you don't really need much reflexes. But it's an interesting idea, just a little easy and repetitive.
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